To make up for that crap post. I will share something that I wrote last week. It was to play around with a common idea, but to write it in a better way.
Un beta'd, I'll eventually get to editing this sometime.

( The cruelty of children is astonishing and surprising. )

A long, long time ago, in a classroom far away, my brain was under attack by an urge to write poetry. So I did and then just as suddenly as it attacked...it left me D:
I haven't written any poems, let alone any good ones in a while, but today while on the train I got attacked again. So Voila...poems.

Critique? Comments? <3 OMFG. This is so ( Read more... )

So I had this idea for a longer story (FIRST ONE THAT I WILL COMPLETE. I'll force myself to.) And here is a character sketch...well sort of two characters in one.

Thoughts wanted really badly. Critique would be ♥

He kicks the air, oxygen atoms and hydrogen and nitrogen scattering, creating a whistling sound. Another kick follows immediately after, ( Read more... )